Talk:Treaty of Versailles
The article needs to begin with a definition. --Larry Sanger 14:46, 11 May 2008 (CDT)
Chop and change it yourself if there's a problem. This article doesn't belong to anyone here by virtue of merely starting it. Denis Cavanagh 14:49, 11 May 2008 (CDT)
I know that Denis. No need to be defensive. :-) If you don't care about this, someone else can improve the article, of course. But you could, because you wrote it and know the subject matter!
It also needs to sum up in the first paragraph (more briefly than this does) what the treaty accomplished or what its provisions were. --Larry Sanger 14:52, 11 May 2008 (CDT)
I'll be working on it today and tomorrow, not a finished article just yet :-) Don't have time right now to work on the lede, maybe later. Denis Cavanagh 15:08, 11 May 2008 (CDT)