Talk:Tony Blair/Archive 1

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Editor plan and guidelines

• A general principle of all articles about political figures: it should be impossible to determine whether the authors are supporters or opponents of the subject of the article. Citizendium is neither Labour nor Conservative.

Or, in the UK, Liberal Democrat, Green, any Northern Irish or nationalist party, Respect, Health Concern, Veritas, independent... :-) John Stephenson 10:06, 25 July 2007 (CDT)

Comments

I think it's hardly true that Blair was responsible for the introduction of the private sector into British health and education; private hospitals and schools have a rather long history here. It is true that he fostered public finance initiatives that drew private funding into capital projects to build new hospitals for the NHS, and that these have been controversial. It is also true that he oversaw a massive increase in Government funding for the NHS, and also for education at all levels (and for science). It is also true that his Government has seen the longest sustained period of economic growth ever known in the UK, and a growth rate outstripping European neighbours. Amongst his legacies it is probably appropriate to mention the Peace agreement in Northern Ireland, and devolution in Scotland and Wales. It is important to note that he won three general elections, the first two with massive majorities, breaking an 18 year period of rule by the Conservative party.Gareth Leng 12:14, 24 July 2007 (CDT)

You're certainly right that the bit about the private sector is misleading. The rest we can add as well, though the idea that Tony Blair is largely responsible for peace in Northern Ireland would have to be seen very much as a continuation of the work of the Tories, the NI parties and the Irish government. John Stephenson 22:55, 24 July 2007 (CDT)

See Blair's last question time. [1]

I think politicians on all sides have acknowledged that Blair's personal role was a major factor in the success of the northern Ireland peace process.Gareth Leng 03:44, 25 July 2007 (CDT)

OK, though it is traditional to praise an outgoing PM - we will need to add evidence of the positive role he played. Also, it's debatable how successful anyone has been in NI, given that the armed factions haven't disarmed and the assembly has only just restarted after gaps of many years. You could add a section on his legacy. John Stephenson 03:52, 25 July 2007 (CDT)

The IRA has disarmed, and I don't know of any evidence that it's not been complete [2] As for praising outgoing PMs - this is Paisley we're talking about. The idea of him praising any British politician under any circumstances would have been as laughable as, well, the idea of him smiling and sharing a platform and a role in Government with Sinn Fein.... But both sides have very warmly attested to Blair's role.Gareth Leng 09:30, 25 July 2007 (CDT)

OK, I stand corrected regardind disarmament - though de Chastelain said he couldn't be certain they'd handed over every bullet, disarmament and re-armament have happened before, and IRA men are still out there. Why don't you edit the page? John Stephenson 10:01, 25 July 2007 (CDT)

Edits on prime ministerial career

I've changed Gareth's very substantive contribution here a bit: firstly to add more subtitles, including some rearrangement, and secondly I removed a few sentences which I felt were a bit pro-Tony. See what you think. Probably some could go back in, e.g. about more nurses, in a more neutral way. I also modified the introduction to credit others in the NI peace thing. John Stephenson 00:00, 26 July 2007 (CDT)

That's fine; it was written quickly. I think it's important to be sympathetic to the person, while being strictly objective about the facts.Gareth Leng 04:07, 26 July 2007 (CDT)

I think quotes are useful in succinctly and definitively displaying Blair's views, but I am aware that this can lead to a partisan appearance. I'd like to see the quotes balanced (as in the Iraq example) with quotes from critics. How does the box format (as in the Iraq section) work for others? Should we try to extend this to other sections?Gareth Leng 07:54, 26 July 2007 (CDT)

I quite like this, but not the colour. John Stephenson 04:04, 27 July 2007 (CDT)

The section on personal life is an edited and trimmed version from Wikipedia, and is just intended as a provisional place-holding exercise. Please modify/ extend revise improve, whatever.Gareth Leng 10:47, 26 July 2007 (CDT)

OK, but now we have to credit Wikipedia. John Stephenson 04:04, 27 July 2007 (CDT)

It is quite different, so one could argue that the WP box need not be checked, but I think we should play safe until it's been rewritten again. John Stephenson 04:09, 27 July 2007 (CDT)

Agreed; try a different colour for the boxes? Other things? I think obviously the Brown-Blair relationship needs a section, and Blair and the Media, and Blair's Inner Circle (the roles of John Prescott, Peter Mandelson and Alistair Campbell), reporting criticism of his "presidential" style of leadership. Gareth Leng 04:39, 27 July 2007 (CDT)

OK; what worries me though is it might start to digress. We don't need to go into great detail about other figures; it can be discussed from all angles using other articles, such as Labour Party (UK). John Stephenson 08:12, 27 July 2007 (CDT)

Agreed; but I think the names should be mentioned, if only to link to other articles; lets try to do this with brevity?Gareth Leng 10:36, 27 July 2007 (CDT)

Good work

This is a remarkable article--it seems, I don't know much about the topic other than what I've gleaned from the news. Seems to be fairly even-handed as well. Thanks, Gareth et al. --Larry Sanger 06:08, 31 July 2007 (CDT)

I've moved the books section to Tony Blair: bibliography, hope that's OK. We need some more photos, but here I declare an incompetence. I think I've gone as far as I can with this article. Gareth Leng 09:44, 1 August 2007 (CDT)

I'll be in eventually to have a look; well done, you took the bare bones I started it with and really fleshed it out. Also, I have moved the bibliography to Tony_Blair/Bibliography as this appears to be the direction subpages are taking. John Stephenson 04:41, 2 August 2007 (CDT)

Most controversial? not

Blair is not one of the five or six most controversial PMs -- look at Asquith, Lloyd George, Chamberlain, Churchill, Eden, Wilson Thatcher etc. who were more controversialRichard Jensen 21:41, 2 August 2007 (CDT)

He is one of the most controversial in recent times, and the amended sentence does not convey the sheer relief of the country in seeing him go! Something has to be put there, with qualifications...--Martin Baldwin-Edwards 21:49, 2 August 2007 (CDT)

more controversial than Thatcher????? hardly. The original sentence did not actually tell the reader anything....if it meant to say many people hated him it did not convey that. If it meant his policies were rejected, that is not true, as Brown has the same basic policies. Richard Jensen 22:08, 2 August 2007 (CDT)

It can be claimed that he is as controversial as Thatcher. The thing that he is most hated for, is the invasion of Iraq and UK subordination to US interests; although Brown did not oppose the invasion, it is not seen as a major policy he will support for much longer. Therefore, in the eyes of the electorate, Brown does not have the same policies. Regardless of your opinion, it is the opinion of the population of the UK that is relevant here, and this article is not reporting that correctly.--Martin Baldwin-Edwards 22:25, 2 August 2007 (CDT)

I objected to this sentence: perhaps earned a reputation as one of the most controversial holders of Britain's highest political office. That's a poor historical judgment, badly weakened by the "perhaps" and basically meaningless. Has to be rewritten. how about: "entering office with high hopes and high popularity, he left with low poll ratings and a sense of disappointment in opportunities not realized." Brown reaffirmed his support for US earlier this week in Washington. Richard Jensen 23:15, 2 August 2007 (CDT)

Introduction

I partially restored some material deleted or modified by Richard Jensen for several reasons: firstly, the removal of the note about Blair's tenure being one of the most controversial rendered the opener ungrammatical, and also no longer highlighted how Blair's terms in office were so high-profile. I removed the bit about his "permanent campaign" because this term is not widely used in the UK and was denied as a policy by the Blair team - it could go elsewhere, just not in the introduction, I feel. I also removed the bit about handing over to Gordon Brown - I don't think this is so relevant in the introduction for an article about Blair, and it inaccurately portrayed their relationship as one of close allies. The bit about general elections I left in. Richard's original revisions ("tweaks") are here. John Stephenson 21:46, 2 August 2007 (CDT)

it is not true that he is among the 2-3 most controversial PM's and yes the permanent campaign model is used by political scientists in Britain, see citations. It is highly relevent to discuss how he left office. Richard Jensen 21:48, 2 August 2007 (CDT)