Talk:Pierre Molinier: Difference between revisions

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::This is the first revision of the entry.  If there are any mistakes, comments, errors, then by all means let me know. --[[User:Robert W King|Robert W King]] 12:52, 10 July 2007 (CDT)
::This is the first revision of the entry.  If there are any mistakes, comments, errors, then by all means let me know. --[[User:Robert W King|Robert W King]] 12:52, 10 July 2007 (CDT)
:::Well, for one thing, the present tense ought to disappear! [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 10:19, 11 July 2007 (CDT)

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Article style

There is a lot of good information here, but as an encyclopedia entry it should be written in prose rather than listed in the form of a timeline. -- Eric Winesett 12:14, 9 May 2007 (CDT)

Molinier's Biography will be ready in a prose form within a few days. Pierre Petit 08:11, 21 May 2007 (CDT)

Dr. Petit has requested that we help with copyediting (and dividing into paragraphs, no doubt). --Larry Sanger 09:16, 10 July 2007 (CDT)

Can do.--Robert W King 09:16, 10 July 2007 (CDT)
This is the first revision of the entry. If there are any mistakes, comments, errors, then by all means let me know. --Robert W King 12:52, 10 July 2007 (CDT)
Well, for one thing, the present tense ought to disappear! Hayford Peirce 10:19, 11 July 2007 (CDT)