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[[User:Thomas Mandel|Thomas Mandel]] 20:01, 9 June 2007 (CDT)
[[User:Thomas Mandel|Thomas Mandel]] 20:01, 9 June 2007 (CDT)
==Complementary==
You ask what I wish to see in the article. Well, is this true of DNA?
Jonas Salk ''The Anatomy of Reality''
"It appears that all units of reality are comprised of two basic elements in an asymmetrical binary relationship in dynamic interaction..." (p.38) "As noted above, one of the basic ideas that underlies my thinking, one of the images I have in mind when I contemplate the universe, is that it is constructed upon a simple pattern of order that may be seen in any and all phenomena, no matter how complex. The simple pattern is that of a binary relationship, recognized in a binary system. The implication here is that everything in nature, everything in the universe, is composed of networks of two elements, or two parts in functional relationship to each other..."(p.39) "The most fundamental phenomenon in the universe is relationship."(p.44)
Consider that the entire store of DNA knowledge is derived from a pair of base pairs held together by a pair of pairs which is then read as a pair, transcribed as a pair and finally constructed as an amino acid as a pair i.e., as a pair one by one via an enzyme which is a pair.
[[User:Thomas Mandel|Thomas Mandel]] 23:39, 9 June 2007 (CDT)

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Nancy Sculerati has nominated the version dated 21:20, 22 May 2007 (CDT) of this article for approval. Other editors may also sign to support approval. The Biology Workgroup is overseeing this approval. Unless this notice is removed, the article will be approved on June 21, 2007.


Article Checklist for "DNA/Draft"
Workgroup category or categories Chemistry Workgroup, Biology Workgroup [Categories OK]
Article status External article: from another source, with little change
Underlinked article? No
Basic cleanup done? Yes
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Approval Area

I placed the ToApprove template for this article and given two weeks per Biology editor Nancy Sculerati. Matt Innis (Talk) 15:38, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

Copyright violation?

This looks like just a rip of a Wikipedia article... can someone fix it? Shanya Almafeta 15:28, 11 February 2007 (CST)

We should all edit it. Before the unfork, we had all the WP articles, and as they became different we made them CZ live. I see your concern, but it is legitimate to import articles and then work on them. Nancy Sculerati MD 15:33, 11 February 2007 (CST)


Proposition:

This article is far too big.

Lets identify 1. the correct sections for a coherent comprehesive introduction to understanding the key biological roles of DNA

2. Packages that form the nuclueus of other vital biology topics.

I'm talkin' RADICAL SURGERY HERE.

Che?

David Tribe 01:33, 12 February 2007 (CST)

Here is the current content:

1 Physical and chemical properties
1.1 Base pairing
1.2 Sense and antisense
1.3 Supercoiling
1.4 Alternative double-helical structures
1.5 Quadruplex structures
2 Chemical modifications
2.1 Regulatory base modifications
2.2 DNA damage
3 Overview of biological functions
3.1 Transcription and translation
3.2 Replication
4 Genes and genomes
5 Interactions with proteins
5.1 DNA-binding proteins
5.2 DNA-modifying enzymes
5.2.1 Nucleases and ligases
5.2.2 Topoisomerases and helicases
5.2.3 Polymerases
6 Genetic recombination
7 Uses in technology
7.1 Forensics
7.2 Bioinformatics
7.3 DNA and computation
7.4 History and anthropology
8 History

I have bolded what seem to be fundamental and should be kept at some level for a primer article. Feel free to add or subrtract from this initial cut. Chris Day (Talk) 01:44, 12 February 2007 (CST)

I disagree with both of you and really like the long detailed article. You just hit cntrl+f or apple key+f and you can find whatever you want in the article. Why not make a simple version as a separate article? -Tom Kelly (Talk) 01:57, 12 February 2007 (CST)
I think what David is suggesting is a primer version, although I don't what to speak for him too much. In my opinion the two could definitely co-exhist. We can have our cake and eat it. Chris Day (Talk) 02:02, 12 February 2007 (CST)
Im not wanting to be dogmatic and don't want to throw anything out just (thinking of) putting some of it elsewhere. It might work if we concentrate on developing all the essentils first but keep it all in one place,

but my point remains that many of these sections are part of important bifgeer stories we also need to write Eg

3.1 Transcription and translation
6 Genetic recombination
7.1 Forensics
7.2 Bioinformatics
7.3 DNA and computation
7.4 History and anthropology'

all these are specialist fields each with a huge story to tell that cannot be done justly here. Why not get those jobs started>, and also do them well


Some comments TEMPORARILY transferred to Talk:Primer on DNA David Tribe 17:23, 12 February 2007 (CST)

But a few hours later RETURNED

Separate Primer rejected

Then returned after discussion with Larry: Still want the lead in developed better and a beeter layout that has a lot of thought about what content is appropriate 22:02, 12 February 2007 (CST)~

DNA essentials?

Top priority is to find a way to create an article that novices will learn a lot of important stuff easily.

Lets keep talking to discover whats the best structure that achieves this and whether for instance thats with a primer plus a big article.

In important topics like DNA a separate primer maybe a good idea. Maybe we can start a tradition of primers, maybe not. Larry might have some argument that its bad.

One way is to have a little link at the top saying DNA primer for those who need the simplest essentials. Unfortunately DNA primer by itself has a special meaning so we could call it DNA for beginners. waadya think? David Tribe 03:47, 12 February 2007 (CST)

Again I put it as a proposition., not a firm judgment and I appreciate the courteous contrary opinion. Maybe we should wait for some others to say something? David Tribe 03:56, 12 February 2007 (CST)

The following analogies are well intentioned but I judge them to be deeply misleading and factually incorrect. DNA is NOT , emphatically NOT, analogous to an operating system. Its not used like a blueprint either- there is no overall physical correspondence between DNA and cellular morphology:

"All cellular organisms contain DNA. DNA, along with other organic molecules, provides a sort of operating system for an organism. It's also compared to a blueprint, since it contains the instructions to construct other components of the cell, namely proteins and RNA molecules. " David Tribe 14:20, 12 February 2007 (CST)

Anaologies for the function of DNA are very difficult to get right across all levels. I agree the blueprint and operating systems are inaccurate and probably not that useful. With repect to hierarchy the best I have seen is a library (the nucleus) with the community as a cell; including police, builders and hospitals. Within the library the shelves were the chromosomes, the books the genes the words the code, the letters the bases. In this usages the DNA is much more than a blue print. The operating system does not work well since it represents information in action, more like the whole cell than just the DNA. Anyway, since no really good analogies are out there it might be best to stick to reality. Chris Day (Talk) 14:28, 12 February 2007 (CST)
Just had a long and fruitful telephone conversation with Rob Tito about analogies (and more importantly COFFEE heck Ive used so many languages for this essential chemical of life that Ive forgotten the english spelling for caffe'). We explored a version of analogy with operating system and Zipfiles that might work. It may well return to the text in a form thats satisfactory David Tribe 15:29, 12 February 2007 (CST)
I just looked to see what is on the web and there are quite a few anaologies out there. Here is one for an operating system where the nucleus of the cell is the kernel of the operating system and the DNA is represented by the source code. This is simlar to my idea above where the DNA represents a subset of the operating system. Chris Day (Talk) 15:38, 12 February 2007 (CST)

Here is another nice one. Chris Day (Talk) 15:50, 12 February 2007 (CST)

Matrix of biology and computer science.
Biology Computer science
1. Digital alphabet consists of bases A, C, T, G 1. Digital alphabet consists of 0, 1
2. Codons consist of three bases 2. Computer bits form bytes
3. Genes consist of codons 3. Files consist of bytes
4. Promoters indicate gene locations 4. File-allocation table indicates file locations
5. DNA information is transcribed into hnRNA and processed into mRNA 5. Disc information is transcribed into RAM
6. mRNA information is translated into proteins 6. RAM information is translated onto a screen or paper
7. Genes may be organized into operons or groups with similar promoters 7. Files are organized into folders
8. "Old" genes are not destroyed; their promoters become nonfunctional 8. "Old" files are not destroyed; references to their location are deleted
9. Entire chromosomes are replicated 9. Entire discs can be copied
10. Genes can diversify into a family of genes through duplication 10. Files can be modified into a family of related files
11. DNA from a donor can be inserted into host chromosomes 11. Digital information can be inserted into files
12. Biological viruses disrupt genetic instructions 12. Computer viruses disrupt software instructions
13. Natural selection modifies the genetic basis of organism design 13. Natural selection procedures modify the software that specifies a machine design
14. A successful genotype in a natural population outcompetes others 14. A successful website attracts more "hits" than others


I have decided to run with Primer on DNA. DNA primer is unfortunate, and PLoS sets the example. Ill do a link in the article and start this again and Tom will rest happy. 17:00, 12 February 2007 (CST)

LOL, I wasn't loosing sleep over it. I just think we could have one article for the nonscientific (meaning for those who have no interest or training in hard science) that is the main article that comes up when you type in DNA. Then you could write another that is really complex, putting big names in it etc etc. I would have the primer come up when DNA is typed in. However I would not call it a Primer... would you? seeing how we use primers with PCR, etc... right? -Tom Kelly (Talk) 21:17, 12 February 2007 (CST)

Should we tag with Health Sciences Workgroup category?

what do you think? -Tom Kelly (Talk) 16:13, 11 March 2007 (CDT)

No harm, I guess, although it seems a little too basic to be in that category. Mutation, on the other hand, should definitely be in the health science workgroup. Chris Day (Talk) 10:08, 12 March 2007 (CDT)

Unprotecting

Doesn't seem to be a reason to have this protected. --Mike Johnson 20:04, 25 March 2007 (CDT)

Images - licensing

Most of the images in this article unfortunately aren't sourced (i.e. no links to where they came from and what license they're available under), so I've gotta delete em. --Mike Johnson 16:08, 26 March 2007 (CDT)

In accordance with the Big Cleanup guidelines, I'm removing the broken image links. Petréa Mitchell 22:00, 28 March 2007 (CDT)

Approval

This key article lacks for nothing but our attention. I am nominating it for approval with a relatively long lead time, I will spend at least 30 minutes every day until then, and I'm hoping that the DNA scientists out there will do the same- maybe in aggregate. Nancy Sculerati 14:58, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

sorry been out of the loop. Will certainly try and do some editing here too. Chris Day (talk) 15:52, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

Thank heavens! Somebody who really knows what he's doing! :-) Nancy Sculerati 16:03, 7 June 2007 (CDT)

For further informations see:

I suggest removing these directives as they are really designed for WP. In some cases, it would be preferrable to leave them and start the article that they refer to here, I think. Nancy Sculerati 09:05, 8 June 2007 (CDT)

reversion

All due respect, the last two edits are wrong, each strand gets a complimentary strand and the result is two identical double helixes. Please do not copyedit for language unless you are absolutely sure of the science. We need more new content and would love to see some new articles - especially from scratch. Nancy Sculerati 18:24, 9 June 2007 (CDT)

I am one of those novices wishing to learn more about DNA. I found this article restates what it took me years to figure out bit bit. Eventually I was surprised to find out that DNA isn't duplicated, it is the complementary that is duplicated. Kornberg explains on page 13 DNA Replication that the entire DNA process is complementary, calling this the most important feature of the duplex model. Thomas Mandel 19:12, 9 June 2007 (CDT)

Thomas, we are trying to get this article into shape for approval. It is now nominated for approval with a long lead, because it needs expert attention. It is not the place, if you wish to help the wiki, to experiment with edits as a novice who wants to learn abut the subject. There are so many articles that are only stubs and so many subjects that are not written about here, perhaps you would help us out and work on them? If you would like to help this article, if there are sentences that don't make sense to you, as a novice, or areas that you wish were here, that yo wanted to know about but are not, if you would explain these on the talk page, we can address them and that will help make it a better article. Nancy Sculerati 19:20, 9 June 2007 (CDT)

I have authored the new article Systems Theory, don't know how I happened to read your article, notice that in systems theory the complementary plays a leading role. I wish that the complementary aspect was made explicite. Kornberg writes "The most important feature of the duplex model for DNA structure is the introduction of the concept of Complementarity. ...Complementarity has come to explain transcription and translation and thus the entire sequence of events in the expression of genetic functions."

Indeed, complementarity plays the leading role in every aspect of DNA, assuming, that is, if the concept is broadened to include complementary structures.

Thomas Mandel 20:01, 9 June 2007 (CDT)