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Is this to be a subsection of the Global Warming article?

I have some purely editing suggestions, but some may be easier to see once this is merged with the article, if that's your intent. Is the anthropogenic term clearly defined in the main article? I'd suggest, if not, that it be there, and bolded. The arguments for and against (I am no expert in the subject0 could be delineated by subheadings.

For the bulleted links at the end, if you aren't already planning to do so, you might put some text with what would become inline citations, so the reader sees a bulleted summary of his arguments, but the citations collect under the references for the article.

Howard C. Berkowitz 14:25, 17 August 2008 (CDT)