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I created two redirects to this article: [[Clausius-Clapeyron equation]] and [[Clausius-Clapeyron relation]]. Both redirects use the ordinary dash ( - ) on our keyboards. The difference between that and the dash that I think you used is ( - – ). Most readers will probably use the keyboard dash to search for this article. Anyhow, thanks for creating this article. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 17:33, 11 September 2009 (UTC) | I created two redirects to this article: [[Clausius-Clapeyron equation]] and [[Clausius-Clapeyron relation]]. Both redirects use the ordinary dash ( - ) on our keyboards. The difference between that and the dash that I think you used is ( - – ). Most readers will probably use the keyboard dash to search for this article. Anyhow, thanks for creating this article. [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 17:33, 11 September 2009 (UTC) | ||
== Suggested revision of lead-in sentence == | |||
Paul, to me, a single-component is a single pure compound like say butane and liquids like gasoline or an aqueous solution of ethanol (which are mixtures of compounds) are not single-component systems. In the lead-in sentence, should it be revised to say "...an equation for a system consisting of two phases of matter in ..." rather than the current "...for a single-component system consisting of two phases in ..." ? [[User:Milton Beychok|Milton Beychok]] 15:50, 12 September 2009 (UTC) | |||
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Thanks for creating this article
I created two redirects to this article: Clausius-Clapeyron equation and Clausius-Clapeyron relation. Both redirects use the ordinary dash ( - ) on our keyboards. The difference between that and the dash that I think you used is ( - – ). Most readers will probably use the keyboard dash to search for this article. Anyhow, thanks for creating this article. Milton Beychok 17:33, 11 September 2009 (UTC)
Suggested revision of lead-in sentence
Paul, to me, a single-component is a single pure compound like say butane and liquids like gasoline or an aqueous solution of ethanol (which are mixtures of compounds) are not single-component systems. In the lead-in sentence, should it be revised to say "...an equation for a system consisting of two phases of matter in ..." rather than the current "...for a single-component system consisting of two phases in ..." ? Milton Beychok 15:50, 12 September 2009 (UTC)