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I'm without doubt that this article will seem very incomplete. I would ask that people discuss before removing (what I think is) well referenced information. I went through a fair amount of work to present the information as cleanly as possible and attribute to sources of information present on the internet. I had to quote two lectures that are not present on the internet, as far as I know. They can be purchased by anyone by going to [http://www.bridgepub.com/ bridge pubs], and probably via email, asking them for the lecture by its attributed title and date. [[User:Terry E. Olsen|Terry E. Olsen]] 18:45, 23 April 2007 (CDT) | I'm without doubt that this article will seem very incomplete. I would ask that people discuss before removing (what I think is) well referenced information. I went through a fair amount of work to present the information as cleanly as possible and attribute to sources of information present on the internet. I had to quote two lectures that are not present on the internet, as far as I know. They can be purchased by anyone by going to [http://www.bridgepub.com/ bridge pubs], and probably via email, asking them for the lecture by its attributed title and date. [[User:Terry E. Olsen|Terry E. Olsen]] 18:45, 23 April 2007 (CDT) | ||
If you could consider re-wording your article to include less subjunctive and passive tense, and make it more, well, active tense and statement-like. As a non-Scientologist, I cannot understand this very well. Thanks.--[[User:Peter A. Lipson|Peter A. Lipson]] 15:08, 30 April 2007 (CDT) | |||
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I'm without doubt that this article will seem very incomplete. I would ask that people discuss before removing (what I think is) well referenced information. I went through a fair amount of work to present the information as cleanly as possible and attribute to sources of information present on the internet. I had to quote two lectures that are not present on the internet, as far as I know. They can be purchased by anyone by going to bridge pubs, and probably via email, asking them for the lecture by its attributed title and date. Terry E. Olsen 18:45, 23 April 2007 (CDT)
If you could consider re-wording your article to include less subjunctive and passive tense, and make it more, well, active tense and statement-like. As a non-Scientologist, I cannot understand this very well. Thanks.--Peter A. Lipson 15:08, 30 April 2007 (CDT)