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| ==Returning to previous edits== | | == For crying out loud == |
| A year on, much of this article remains problematic, particularly the 'immediate response' and 'world response' sections. There is [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=9-11_Attack&diff=100139228&oldid=100133666 this collection of edits] by myself that were editor-reverted in 2007. They sought to remove much exaggeration and present a more balanced picture (e.g. contrary to what it currently says, there were reports of looting after 9/11, and burglaries were higher than during the same time period in 2000 - see [http://www.wnbc.com/news/1424628/detail.html WNBC]). There were also [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=9-11_Attack&diff=100139714&oldid=100139667 edits by Stephen Ewen] on the overthrow of the Taliban that tried to bring this article back to neutrality. Edits like these should be reincorporated, or new ones made in a similar vein. [[User:John Stephenson|John Stephenson]] 20:04, 22 September 2008 (CDT)
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| :I've just incorporated some of these previous edits by Stephen and myself back into the text. However, I then removed the links because they're dead and replaced them with various others covering the argument about looting. See [http://en.citizendium.org/wiki?title=9-11_Attack&diff=100428985&oldid=100385467 here] for all the edits. [[User:John Stephenson|John Stephenson]] 11:59, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
| | * [[9-11 Attack]] |
| | * [[9-11 Attack in New York]] |
| | * [[9-11 Commission/Definition]] which redirects to [[9-11 Commission]] |
| | * [[9-11 Hijackers]] |
| | * [[9-11 conspiracy theory]] |
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| ==Time for major rework==
| | All these must be merged into a single, comprehensive article that can be kept up-to-date in one location. Grrrr. I will make all these articles and add their merger/renaming to my todo list. [[User:Pat Palmer|Pat Palmer]] ([[User talk:Pat Palmer|talk]]) 13:42, 9 March 2024 (CST) |
| I removed what I consider, as a Military Editor, a strained attempt to explain al-Qaeda motivations. At best, this belongs in the [[al-Qaeda]] article.
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| <blockquote>Sedgwick (2004) argues the goal was to provoke a response from the United States that would have a radicalizing impact on al-Qaeda's constituency. Reference to public opinion in the Middle East, especially in Egypt, shows that this is indeed what has happened. Such an impact is a purely political objective, familiar to historians of terrorism from at least the time of Errico Malatesta and the "propaganda of the deed" in the 1870s. While no direct link between Malatesta and al-Qaeda exists, al-Qaeda was certainly in contact with contemporary theories that Malatesta would have recognized and seems to have applied them. Even though its immediate objectives are political rather than religious, al-Qaeda is a distinctively Islamic group. Not only is its chosen constituency a confessional one, but Al-Qaeda also uses - and when necessary adapts - well-known Islamic religious concepts to motivate its operatives, ranging from conceptions of duty to conceptions of ascetic devotion. Terrorism that can be understood in political terms, Sedgwick argues, is susceptible to political remedies.</blockquote>
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| There is an abundant amount of primary and secondary information about why al-Qaeda carried out this operation, and I can say, quite confidently, that Malatesta did not enter into their thinking. See [[al-Qaeda]]. It is, I believe, intellectually dangerous to try to force al-Qaeda into molds of Western thinking; while I do not always agree with [[Michael Scheuer]]; his book, ''Through our Enemies Eyes'', has a pertinent title. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:50, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
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| In addition, I removed material that deals with 2005 and later, which is much better covered elsewhere. Further, neoconservatism does not have anything particular to do with counterterrorism and counterproliferation; if anything, it deals more with [[preventive war]].
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| Referencing needs considerable work. Note that there is no mention of [[National Commission on Terrorist Attacks Upon the United States]], which issued the ''9/11 Commission Report''. EBSCO deep web material simply isn't needed with the enormous amount of data that is freely available. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:56, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
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| ===Focus on the immediate term===
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| Next, this article should be concentrating on the attack and its immediate aftermath, not things that happened weeks and months later. There is, for example, relatively little detail about the immediate emergency services and military response — I was several miles from the Pentagon on 9/11, and the sounds of the crash, the just-too-late fighters, and the sirens are things I shall never forget. I am intimately familiar with the work to reconstitute telecommunications and financial systems in New York, and, again, there's no mention -- or of [[Continuity of Government]]. There is, I'm afraid, too much academic digression about reasons and international motivations.
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| <nowiki>===Domestic American politics===</nowiki>
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| <blockquote>[[Neoconservatism]] came under increasing attack by 2005. In the past national defense had focused on threats from a major nation state. Now the threat was invisible, insidious and of uncertain dimensions. Bush expanded the response to include Iraq, winning Congressional approval (but not UN approval) for an allied invasion of Iraq in 2003, which overthrew Saddam Hussein, established a democratic regime under UN auspisces, and attempted—without success—to stabilize the country against a Sunni-led insurgency. Bush's image soared in the polls, enabling his reelection in 2004.</blockquote>
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| <nowiki>===Reaction against Bush===</nowiki>
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| <blockquote>Starting in 2005, after years of stalemate and frustration in Iraq, American public opinion turned sharply against the war. Democrats won control of both houses of Congress in Nov. 2006 in large part by attacking the Bush policies, and saying the war in Iraq had diverted attention away from al-Qaeda, which had relocated to remote mountains in western Pakistan. The Democrats were unable to change Bush's policies in 2007, and Congress voted to continue funding the war in Iraq. The instability of Pakistan added complexity to the challenge.<ref> [http://www.nytimes.com/2006/11/02/us/politics/02poll.html?_r=1&fta=y&oref=slogin Adam Nagourney and Megan Thee, "With Election Driven by Iraq, Voters Want New Approach," ''New York Times'' November 2, 2006]</ref><br /> <br />
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| In 2008 Bush continued to defend his Iraq war policies as necessary to prevent future attacks by Islamic radicals like those of 9-11. The main GOP candidates for president generally supported Bush's policies, especially Senator [[John McCain]], who took personal credit for the "surge" policy that reduced the level of violence in Iraq in 2007. The Democratic candidates continued to oppose the war<ref> [http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=16970093 NPR, "Iraq War Fades as Issue in Election" Dec. 6, 2007]; [http://politics.nytimes.com/election-guide/2008/issues/index.html#/context=index/issue=iraq ''New York Times'' summary of Iraq issue]; [http://www.cnn.com/ELECTION/2008/issues/issues.iraq.html CNN summary of Iraq issue in election 2008] </ref> Eventually, however, [[Barack Obama]], a Democrat, was to win over McCain.</blockquote>
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| The [[Authorization for the Use of Military Force]] is certainly worth discussing. I can even see an objective discussion of indications and warnings that may have been missed.[[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 23:08, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
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| <nowiki>==Overthrow of Taliban in Afghanistan== </nowiki>
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| President [[George W. Bush]], after a few hours of embarrassing confusion on September 11, found his voice. On September 20, 2001, President Bush told Congress that the attacks were an act of war. He laid responsibility upon al-Qaeda and said its goal was to impose its beliefs upon the entire world. Bush stated that al-Qaeda practiced a form of extremism that perverted the peaceful teachings of Islam and commanded them to murder Christians and Jews, and to kill all Americans. He went on to explain how the political-Islamic group had established a base in remote Afghanistan, protected by the Taliban regime. Bush issued an ultimatum: the Taliban must immediately turn over the al-Qaeda leadership to American justice, or share their fate.<br /><br />
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| Bush stated numerous times that Americans respected the Muslim religion but he promised to systematically destroy terrorists--to hunt them down cave-by-cave and destroy them everywhere in the world, as he stated. No government would be allowed to harbor them. "Either you are with us, or you are with the terrorists," he proclaimed. "From this day forward, any nation that continues to harbor or support terrorism will be regarded by the United States as a hostile regime." Bush called on Congress to authorize military action in Afghanistan, which it did with near unanimous support. Meanwhile, U.S. pollsters confirmed that a strong majority of Americans supported the action.</blockquote>
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| ===Direct relevance to attack and response?===
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| Again, I removed text that seemed to have only a vague relationship. Yes, the UN response needs to be in the article, but Dhanapana and Gregory don't add much; there's plenty of primary information about what the UN had done — for example, there were a series of resolutions isolating the Taliban before 9/11: [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 23:17, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
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| <blockquote>Dhanapala (2005) argues the UN has been at the forefront of the global campaign against terrorism since the 11 September 2001 terrorist attacks in New York, giving the campaign legitimacy and universality. The UN Security Council acted with remarkable speed with its Resolution 1373 and set up a counter-terrorism committee with extensive powers. Its British chairman provided able leadership, but reservations over human rights issues, lack of funding for assistance, and the danger of duplicating the work of other UN bodies with specific mandates have been revealed as deficiencies. The general assembly condemned the events of 11 September 2001 and held debates on the subject later. The secretariat's views were expressed by several eloquent statements by the secretary-general and in a policy working group report that advocated a tripartite strategy of "discussion-denial-cooperation" and made 31 recommendations. Counter-terrorism is only one tool in tackling terrorism. Human rights concerns must be addressed. A separate, functional commission under the Economic and Social Council is recommended to provide the international community with a universal forum for a focused discussion on terrorism.<br /> <br />
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| Gregory (2005) argues 9-11 required a wide-ranging response across all three of the broad divisions of European Union (EU) policymaking competence: the economic and monetary union, common foreign and security policy, and internal security. These policy divisions make up the "three pillars" of the EU's political architecture. Gregory reviews general issues of accountability and human rights protection in the EU's policymaking and implementation process, the evolution of the EU's response to terrorism, and the general response to the 9-11 terrorist attacks. Gregory examines the implications of the various response measures adopted under each "pillar." The article demonstrates the emphasis that the member states have placed on security measures and the wider concerns that their content and speed of adoption left little scope for other views to be heard. The effectiveness of the response measures is crucially dependent on the variable implementation capacity of the member states. </blockquote>
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| Looking at the looting text, I have trouble putting that into the broader context of the emergency response in New York. It seems almost trivia. Putting aside any conspiracy theories, there were enormous lessons learned in communications, command and control; evacuation techniques, etc. The Fire Department of New York put its command post in the lobby of one of the towers; most top commanders were lost at once. There was no backup citywide emergency operations center to the one in WTC 7.
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| The death toll was probably increased by the high-rise fire doctrine of the time: no general evacuation was ordered. A friend of mine, who was a technology vice-president of a financial services firm on the thirty-something floor, snapped back to his Navy days and got everyone out ''immediately''.
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| It would seem that this is more appropriately covered in an article specific to the Twin Towers, just as the after-action report from the Pentagon is 400 pages or so. While, of course, the situation there was not as catastrophic, there were a number of things done well; the [[Incident Command System]] worked at multiple levels. The Chief of the Arlington Fire Department let an assistant run fireground operations, so there was always a chain of command elsewhere.
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| The military command and control response isn't really covered.
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| Should the main article stay relatively small and these become subarticles? [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 00:27, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
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| == Confused on substance and significance of several points ==
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| ...that I moved here.
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| The discussion about looting deals with unproven accusations, and is simply not as significant as missing detail on the timeline of the attacks and both local and national response. If anywhere, the material below belongs in a New York subarticle. It certainly was inappropriate as a footnote, not main text, and with far more references than, for example, the air defense response.
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| :<nowiki><ref>Claims about looting mainly came from Langewiesche, W. (2003) ''American Ground: Unbuilding the World Trade Center''. [http://www.wtclivinghistory.org/introduction.htm Strong criticism of the claims] was published online by an organization called the [http://www.wtclivinghistory.org/introduction.htm WTC Living History Project Group], and has been covered by the ''New York Times'': '[http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9D0CE4DC1730F930A15750C0A9659C8B63 Rebutting a claim of tarnished valor; research challenges account of 9/11 looting by firefighters].' March 23, 2003. Firefighters also protested the claims: see ''Firehouse'', '[http://cms.firehouse.com/web/online/News/Firefighters-Protest-Book-That-Claims-Rescuers-Looted-WTC/46$406 Firefighters protest book that claims rescuers looted WTC].' November 17, 2002. ''Atlantic Monthly'' stood by Langewiesche, however: '[http://www.theatlantic.com/issues/2002/12/letters.htm Letters to the editor]' (scroll down).</ref></nowiki> | |
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| <nowiki>==Turning point==</nowiki>
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| :9-11 was a turning point for the nation.<ref>Birkland, "The World Changed Today" 2004 </ref> The experience of 9-11 changed the Bush administration's "defensive realism" approach to foreign policy into "offensive realism" based on the [[neoconservatism|neo-conservative]] ideological system.
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| I don't understand this. Neoconservatism had been alive and well in the White House, although there were different levels of support. 9/11 was indeed a turning point for many things, but not this.
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| == "Irony" ==
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| I removed this term from the following: ''The German destroyer Lutjens, ironically named for the admiral who commanded the Bismarck on its final voyage, had been doing exercises, in the UK, with the US Burke-class destroyer USS Churchill (DDG-81).'' I fail to see the irony in the situation and I expect most Germans might similarly fail to do so. [[User:David Finn|David Finn]] 12:43, 23 August 2010 (UTC)
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