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This badly needs copyediting. --[[User:Larry Sanger|Larry Sanger]] 10:02, 15 September
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=Article=
== OK, where do we go from here? ==


'''Vietnam War''', also known as the II Indochina War or United State War (in Vietnam), was a conflict which lasted from 1956 to 1975. It saw [[Republic of Vietnam|South Vietnam]] and a  multinational task force led by the [[United States of America]] with support coming from  [[Republic of Korea]]<ref name="linea">[[Jonathan Schell|Shell, Jonathan]], En primera líena, [[Galaxia Gutenberg]], [[Barcelona]], [[1988]], ISBN 84-8109-600-8</ref>, [[Australia]], [[Philiphinas]], [[New Zeland]], [[Thailand]], [[Taiwan]] and [[Spain]]<ref name="spain1">Ministerio de Defensa of Spain, http://www.mde.es/contenido.jsp?id_nodo=4400&&&keyword=&auditoria=F, last visit 2007/12/9</ref> and fighting and defeated by [[National Front for the Liberation of South Vietnam]], also known as Viet Cong, and [[Democratic Republic of Vietnam|North Vietnam]].
Oh Brave New World after the archiving, which has such wondrous things in it. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 21:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
:keep reading friend.


==Origins==
==Green Box==
North Vietnam and South Vietnam were parts of the [[French Indochina]]. In 1957 they won their independence from [[French Union]] after the [[Indochina War]] and french defeat in [[Battle of Diem Bien Phu]].
The green box at the top of the article adds some necessary context to this article, but there is a chronological gaffe.  The box says "[[Indochinese revolution|First Indochina War]] covers closely the anticolonial war against France, with interruptions for the events of the Second World War."  But the First Indochina War starts ''after'' World War II.  So how is that an "interruption?"  Please fix.


In late 50's, in Asia, many new countries were to win their independence from european colonial powers. At the same time the [[Cold War]] began and the United States didn't want to lost influence in the World.
Regarding the remainder of the box, isn't it possible to discuss these ''related articles'' on the [[Vietnam War/Related Articles|Related Articles]] page?  I think that it would make more sense.  [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


In the Geneva Conference, in 1954, both Vietnams according to summon a referendum in July of 1956 to know if the people of Vietnam wanted to form a only one country or not. But [[Vgo Dinh Diem]], president of South Vietnam, knew that to wing that referendum was very dificult because, and this is a key to understand this war for writter like Jonathan Schell, vietnam people wanted to be a one country<ref name="linea"/>.
{|border="1"
|style="background:lightgreen"|''This is a major second-level article for numerous articles about an extremely complex situation from 1962 to 1975.  [[Vietnam wars]] covers the context of conflict  between 1868 and 1999; there are separate articles on earlier history. There was anti-French activity, but the main [[First Indochina War]] came after [[Indochina and the Second World War|the Second World War]]. This ends in 1975 with the fall of South Vietnam, but other wars continue in the [[Vietnam wars]] article.''
|}''


In the other hand, the [[War World II]] experience, when the Nazi Germany wasn't contain in his expansionistic political, created in the United State political class the idea that the history could repeat again, this time with the Soviet Union and the communism expansion<ref name="linea"/>. It was the [[Domino theory]].
==Headings==
I'm going to recommend also that the heading "Regional activity before South Vietnamese independence" find a shorter title so that the TOC isn't so wide. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


==Military history==
== First Section ==
This war had four phases.


From 1956 to 1965 when fighting vitnamits against vietnaminits, but in 1959 died two firsth assesors from United States in Bien Hoa Base.
The last sentence in the first paragraph should wrap up the lede, to wit, it should explain why the topic ends in 1975 (i.e., south vietnamese surrender).  I'd also like to drop the reference to the first century conflict with China; it's just too far removed in time to be relevant.  It could probably be mentioned paranthetically: "... but to a long history of Chinese attempts to control the region (going back to the first century)."  "This article focuses on ..." I'm not a fan of self-referentiality.  The famous photograph of the helicopter on the roof during the evacuation in 1975, I've heard was ''not'' the U.S. embassy itself.  The paragraph dealing with weather is really out of place here.  It's interesting and important information, but it seems out of place here.
Last, the first section should also mention that the Vietnamese call this the "American War."
[[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


From 1965 to 1968 when South Vietnam Army (ARNV) and United States won in land and they recover area.
:Yes, I too read the other day that the evacuation was from a neighboring building. Maybe in an obit of the guy who took the photo? I think that's the source.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 21:59, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


From 1968 to 1973 when the War was very unpopular in United States and in the rest of the World (speciali afther the [[Battle of Khe Sanh]] and the [[Tet Offensive]]).
::We're all correct about the helicopters. Indeed, the most commonly used photograph is from a nearby CIA building, but there was also desperation at the Embassy and elsewhere.


From 1973 to 1975 when South Vietnam fought alone against NFL and principally North Vietnam Army (NVA).
::Let me think about China; some reference is important.


::I moved the weather to the beginning of large-scale combat. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 22:04, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


'''Work in Progress'''
:::Long time coming.... I've reworked this whole section into a lede and an "overview" section. [[User:Russell D. Jones|Russell D. Jones]] 21:40, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
 
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=Further comment=
==Why the article was moved==
The article above was moved by request of Richard Jensen, history editor, because it needs considerable work and probably cannot be improved, at least not in its present form. --[[User:Larry Sanger|Larry Sanger]] 13:10, 2 October 2007 (CDT)

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OK, where do we go from here?

Oh Brave New World after the archiving, which has such wondrous things in it. Howard C. Berkowitz 21:01, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

keep reading friend.

Green Box

The green box at the top of the article adds some necessary context to this article, but there is a chronological gaffe. The box says "First Indochina War covers closely the anticolonial war against France, with interruptions for the events of the Second World War." But the First Indochina War starts after World War II. So how is that an "interruption?" Please fix.

Regarding the remainder of the box, isn't it possible to discuss these related articles on the Related Articles page? I think that it would make more sense. Russell D. Jones 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

This is a major second-level article for numerous articles about an extremely complex situation from 1962 to 1975. Vietnam wars covers the context of conflict between 1868 and 1999; there are separate articles on earlier history. There was anti-French activity, but the main First Indochina War came after the Second World War. This ends in 1975 with the fall of South Vietnam, but other wars continue in the Vietnam wars article.

Headings

I'm going to recommend also that the heading "Regional activity before South Vietnamese independence" find a shorter title so that the TOC isn't so wide. Russell D. Jones 21:12, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

First Section

The last sentence in the first paragraph should wrap up the lede, to wit, it should explain why the topic ends in 1975 (i.e., south vietnamese surrender). I'd also like to drop the reference to the first century conflict with China; it's just too far removed in time to be relevant. It could probably be mentioned paranthetically: "... but to a long history of Chinese attempts to control the region (going back to the first century)." "This article focuses on ..." I'm not a fan of self-referentiality. The famous photograph of the helicopter on the roof during the evacuation in 1975, I've heard was not the U.S. embassy itself. The paragraph dealing with weather is really out of place here. It's interesting and important information, but it seems out of place here. Last, the first section should also mention that the Vietnamese call this the "American War." Russell D. Jones 21:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes, I too read the other day that the evacuation was from a neighboring building. Maybe in an obit of the guy who took the photo? I think that's the source.... Hayford Peirce 21:59, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
We're all correct about the helicopters. Indeed, the most commonly used photograph is from a nearby CIA building, but there was also desperation at the Embassy and elsewhere.
Let me think about China; some reference is important.
I moved the weather to the beginning of large-scale combat. Howard C. Berkowitz 22:04, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
Long time coming.... I've reworked this whole section into a lede and an "overview" section. Russell D. Jones 21:40, 19 October 2012 (UTC)
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