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I have completed my revision of the lede, history and politics sections, and I now plan to start a rewrite of the economy paragraph.[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 06:06, 15 February 2012 (UTC) | I have completed my revision of the lede, history and politics sections, and I now plan to start a rewrite of the economy paragraph.[[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 06:06, 15 February 2012 (UTC) | ||
I don't consider the paragraphs on devolution and law to be of an acceptable standard of clarity, balance and accuracy. Would somebody else care to overhaul them? [[User:Nick Gardner|Nick Gardner]] 21:22, 15 February 2012 (UTC) |
Revision as of 15:22, 15 February 2012
Review and overhaul
I have begun a review of this article with a view to making it fit for approval. I have found its lede and its opening paragraphs to contain inaccuracies and irrelevant or misleading statements and I am attempting to rectify those shortcomings. Comment and criticisms will be welcome. Nick Gardner 21:47, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
I have completed my revision of the lede, history and politics sections, and I now plan to start a rewrite of the economy paragraph.Nick Gardner 06:06, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
I don't consider the paragraphs on devolution and law to be of an acceptable standard of clarity, balance and accuracy. Would somebody else care to overhaul them? Nick Gardner 21:22, 15 February 2012 (UTC)