User:Howard C. Berkowitz/Talk - Cell phone jammer

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I wrote a lede in CZ style; the lede contains the name of the article, and does not have a heading preceding it.

This will need copy editing. Acronyms should be defined when first used.

Legal aspects of interference with cell phones needs to be discussed. Howard C. Berkowitz 02:48, 28 September 2010 (UTC)

I'd email a note on this first, but your email function doesn't seem to be enabled. I see the only reference placed on the original article is an external link to his store. First, we avoid external links inline, and I'd be happy to help format a reference to a specific point at the site. Second, and a matter of more concern, we do have a no-self-promotion rule, and only referencing your own business falls under it.

Speaking as an Engineering Editor with knowledge of this particular subject, I am finding it difficult to understand some of the text. May I help try to clarify it? This is not a matter of understanding how TDMA works, but the prose. Howard C. Berkowitz 14:59, 28 September 2010 (UTC)