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==Origin of the BMW motorcycles article==
==Origin of the BMW motorcycles article==


This article is based on the Wikipedia article by the same name and to which I contributed major portions.  However, I have edited it to shorten it and have reorganized major parts of it in the interest of clarity and brevity. I plan to do further edits both for clarity and brevity.
This article is based on the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BMW_motorcycles Wikipedia article] by the same name and to which I contributed major portions.  However, I have edited it heavily and deleted sections to shorten it, and I have reorganized major parts of it in the interest of clarity and brevity. I plan to do further edits both for clarity and brevity.


I have also supplied all the photos in this article, most of which I also supplied to the Wikipedia article but some of which are not there.
I have also supplied all the photos in this article, most of which I also supplied to the Wikipedia article but some of which are not there.


I believe this article is a significant improvement over the Wikipedia version, and will get better thanks to Citizendium's barriers to vandalism.
I believe this article is a <font color=crimson>significant</font> improvement over the Wikipedia version, and will get better thanks to Citizendium's barriers to anonymous users and vandalism.


[[User:Jeffrey M. Dean|Jeff Dean]] 12:49, 15 April 2007 (CDT)
[[User:Jeffrey M. Dean|Jeff Dean]] 17:51, 15 April 2007 (CDT)

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 Definition:  Motorcycles produced by the German company BMW, part of its Corporate and Brand Development division called Motorrad, since 1923. [d] [e]
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Origin of the BMW motorcycles article

This article is based on the Wikipedia article by the same name and to which I contributed major portions. However, I have edited it heavily and deleted sections to shorten it, and I have reorganized major parts of it in the interest of clarity and brevity. I plan to do further edits both for clarity and brevity.

I have also supplied all the photos in this article, most of which I also supplied to the Wikipedia article but some of which are not there.

I believe this article is a significant improvement over the Wikipedia version, and will get better thanks to Citizendium's barriers to anonymous users and vandalism.

Jeff Dean 17:51, 15 April 2007 (CDT)

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