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==Start article on [[Thylakoids]]== | ==Start article on [[Thylakoids]]== | ||
Begin as stub. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 22:50, 4 January 2010 (UTC) | Begin as stub. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 22:50, 4 January 2010 (UTC) | ||
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Your prose has a poetic quality Anthony. The first sentence though is too long, I think it would help to split it. But the article says enough and says it nicely. Am happy to nominate for approval when you're ready.[[User:Gareth Leng|Gareth Leng]] 17:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC) |
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Start article on Thylakoids
Begin as stub. Anthony.Sebastian 22:50, 4 January 2010 (UTC)
Short and sweet
Your prose has a poetic quality Anthony. The first sentence though is too long, I think it would help to split it. But the article says enough and says it nicely. Am happy to nominate for approval when you're ready.Gareth Leng 17:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC)